Feedback on the Doctor Who Analysis

The feedback from my peers was:

• Needs more development on Todorov theory. Terminology is used correctly and covered all the theories well.
• Could be more interactive and less text but well developed
• Funny and relevant pictures which kept us interested. Analysis could be more developed. Needs structured paragraphs instead of bullet points.
• Well explained and kept us entertained because of the pictures, could expand on camera shots and music
• Great level of detail, explanation and use of terminology
• Well explained theories and entertaining but could develop points on character representation

I think that the majority of these are fair. I think that I needed to expand and develop some of the points made especially on Propp's character types theory. I used bullet points because I find them easier and quicker to understand and revise from.  Also I have used colour well to separate the headings from the text. I tried to make it entertaining so it is more enjoyable to read and, judging from the feedback, I have achieved this.